Interview with a Teen Blogger May 21, 2012
Posted by Ronica Stromberg in Uncategorized.Tags: A Shadow in the Dark, blog tour, teen, young adult novel
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Teen blogger Charity U posted a review of my YA book A Shadow in the Dark and an interview of me at her site, Austenitis. She said that even though the book is aimed at teens younger than herself, she enjoyed it. I’m happy to see the book resonated with another young adult!
You can read the review and interview and comment at her site, http://austenitis.blogspot.com/2012/05/shadow-in-dark.html.
Writing for Anthologies, Part 2 April 15, 2012
Posted by Ronica Stromberg in Uncategorized.Tags: motherhood, parenting young children, writing for anthologies, young moms
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I just received my author copies of a new anthology, Always There. These true stories show how God moves in the lives of mothers of young children. The anthology makes seventeen I’ve had stories published in. and as I did with prior anthologies, I’ve now read every story in it. The best way to write for anthologies is to read them so you know what publishers are looking for. 
Always There surprised me with its depth. I was expecting stories along the line of ”the five-second rule” (how parents become increasingly lax about allowing their children to eat food dropped on the floor) or “the crying kids in Wal-Mart” (how parents used to be annoyed by crying children in department and grocery stores but now are the parents of those children themselves). These are the types of stories young mothers tell one another while commiserating over the struggles of parenthood, but such stories have been told so often they’re clichés. Always There skipped the clichés, the trite, and the shallow in laying open what women in the trenches of early motherhood truly feel.
One woman who struggled with infertility wrote of hating pregnant women. Several women wrote of feeling inadequate and overwhelmed as mothers. Others spoke of the difficulties of missing sleep. I especially appreciated this statement from Rachel Swenson Balducci: “Rarely does any good come from a sleep-deprived mother analyzing the way things are” (p. 131). Plenty of truth in that! But every story also included hope and the quiet acknowledgment that God is with us every step of the way.
This anthology is produced for MOPS (Mothers of Preschoolers), and I expect it will comfort and uplift young moms. If I submit to the publishers again, I will keep in mind that they, like most anthology producers, want honesty and insight, the a-ha rather than the ho-hum.
Redundancy in Writing March 4, 2012
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I’ve been reading a lot of government documents lately, and I find the authors often use several words where one would do. For instance, the words “due to the fact that” could easily be replaced by “because.” This kind of puffery slows down text and ruins the flow. Beginning writers may have a hard time detecting it because it even creeps into two-word combinations. The following redundancies could all be said in one word. I’m sure you can think of others.
- absolutely vital
- advance planning
- basic essentials
- brief synopsis
- circle around
- close proximity
- completely unanimous
- continue on
- cooperate together
- enclosed herewith
- end result
- final conclusion
- free gift
- identical match
- new innovation
- old adage
- personal opinion
- refer back
- repeat again
- sit down
- stand up
- sudden impulse
- sum total
- summarize briefly
- usual habit
I worry that this inflated language will slip into my writing because I’m reading so much of it. And I remember how many years it took me to break the habit of saying “unthaw” instead of thaw.
On guard!
Fashion in Fiction February 5, 2012
Posted by Ronica Stromberg in Uncategorized.Tags: fashion, YA fiction
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A standard piece of advice for YA writers is to avoid using slang. What’s current slang when you’re writing a novel may be outdated by the time your novel hits print. But what about fashion? How should your characters dress?
If you’re a historical novelist, no problem–do your homework for the time period and have your characters dress accordingly. But, if you’re writing for modern-day audiences, should your characters be wearing “hoodies” and “skinny jeans”? Probably not. Fashions go out as quickly as they come in, and you want as many generations of readers (and accompanying sales) as you can get for a book.
While in high school, I read a YA novel in which the main character wore orange, high-top, canvas tennis shoes. These had been somewhat popular when I was in elementary school, although the preferred color was black. The fact that this character kept wearing these tennis shoes and felt really connected to them suggested to me that the book might be dated. A peek at the copyright date confirmed it was.
Now, I was an avid reader and just because a character dressed behind the times didn’t spell the death of a book for me. (I would have never gotten through all those Nancy Drew and Trixie Belden books while I was in elementary school, if that was the case. Only years later did I learn what “pumps,” “saddle shoes,” and “pedal pushers” were.) Still, when I write a book–or even a short story–I try to make my characters as timeless as possible. One way of doing this is keeping descriptions of their clothing basic.
Some clothes never go out. Blue jeans are perpetually popular with teens; it’s just the styles and names for them that change. What were ”bell bottoms” in the 1970s resurged as ”flares” recently. “Pedal pushers” of the 1950s became today’s “capris.” I will describe a character as wearing blue jeans and allow readers to imagine the current style.
I find the following clothing items most timeless:
tennis shoes
T-shirts
blue jeans
leather jackets
sweatshirts
turtlenecks
peasant blouses and skirts
Change in the Magazine Market January 16, 2012
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Writer’s Digest recently posted a stat (based on Affinity surveys) that at least 15 magazines generate a larger digital audience than print audience. These magazines included ESPN the Magazine, The Atlantic, Forbes, and Wired. I can see why Wired, a technology magazine, might have a digital audience bigger than its print audience, but I’m left wondering about the other 14-or-so magazines. How big is their print audience? If it’s really small, then the stat isn’t saying much. So many magazines have gone under in the past few years, and I’ve witnessed several that went from a print format to online before going under completely. Others are producing a free online magazine–no charge for subscriptions but no pay for submissions either. They’re still in business, but I can’t imagine them selling a lot of print subscriptions when they’re giving away the same magazine online.
I continue to write only for paying magazines, but this grows increasingly difficult as print magazines either go under or go online. Many e-magazines either don’t pay or pay little. Even when they continue paying the same word rate (X number of dollars or cents per word), online articles usually have shorter word counts. Fewer words, less pay. Sometimes writers can recoup some of that with graphics, photos, video, or games, but planning for these additional items requires a bit different mindset.
This last week, I also heard that a major women’s magazine plans to switch entirely to reader-written content. I wonder whether any of the reader-writers will be paid.
Times are changing. I’m taking note, adjusting, and continuing to sell . . . thankfully.
Around the World in Seconds January 1, 2012
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I received a report from WordPress about how my blog is doing. I already knew from the ticker on my site and regular stat reports how many visitors the blog has in a year and how many subscribers. (Believe me, I’m surprised my site has any subscribers–none of which I know–because I don’t actively promote subscriptions.) What really surprised me is where my visitors are coming from. Most come from the United States, followed by Canada and the Philippines, but I’ve also had visitors from Guatemala, Mexico, Brazil, Venezuela, Columbia, Latvia, The United Kingdom, Poland, The Ukraine, Germany, Nigeria, Kenya, Namibia, Indonesia, Thailand, Jordan, and Australia. Some of the English-speaking countries I can understand because my picture book, The Time-for-bed Angel, was published internationally and sold in them, but I don’t know how all of these other people around the world found my site. Amazing. When you post words online, you never know how far they’ll go. I’m humbled and delighted at the same time. Happy New Year to all of you!
